Collaboration ahoy

From Q, to whom I apologize for being a slowpoke.

Time to write a poem.

Here's how it goes:

I start a poem with a single line. Then, each of you adds a line in the comments. You don't have to be a poet, and your line doesn't have to be brilliant--it's just a few words, after all. You don't need to copy and paste the lines before it into your comment, either. All you need to do is make sure it fits with the preceding lines.

I'll close comments and put the lines together in a day or two, putting in a last line if necessary, then post the poem with the linked names of people who participated (so don't be anonymous, either!).

Ready? Here's the line:

I am a little stiller around the edges

13 comments:

Emma 12/24/2009 10:26 AM  

Shift-shaping on the inside

Q 12/24/2009 10:52 AM  

now that you are gone from

Priya 12/24/2009 11:10 AM  

the place where frost

Maya Ganesan 12/24/2009 12:01 PM  

reaches out

Summermoon 12/24/2009 12:25 PM  

The days overflow quickly

Cassandra 12/24/2009 6:52 PM  

as you kiss me too much

Noël De Vries 12/24/2009 7:05 PM  

goodbye

faithfullyme 12/24/2009 8:19 PM  

as the waves whisper against my toes

R. 12/24/2009 9:28 PM  

I wander through the wonder

Alla 12/24/2009 11:42 PM  

wanting more

Erin 12/25/2009 2:09 PM  

almost tasting a thrill

Every time it rains she just feels a lot better... 12/26/2009 6:45 AM  

skipping over it like stones on water

cuileann 12/28/2009 12:13 AM  

I think that's an excellent ending, so I shall close the comments now.

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